Permission to take control from Better; http://narutobase.net/forums/converse.php?u=95567&u2=70437&page=2
Style approval; http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=157595&page=32&p=14506957#post14506957
Resubmitting: Everything is completely rewritten so I omitted the bold;
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